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Post by zuan on Jun 16, 2008 13:29:23 GMT -5
my veiw im confused: pistol?,artix,me,neo,ranger confused a little more detail mabye im not sure about any of it try to explain whatsa going on EG.
god good as Zuan ran to his brother as blood spilled from the back of his head a metal cilinder ologged in his cranium.
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Post by ty2toon on Jun 16, 2008 15:57:13 GMT -5
So Neo appears to be a good guy, you seem unsafe(zuan), The Ranger can easily kill both of you! ;D
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Post by Jester (Bio.) on Jun 17, 2008 10:34:12 GMT -5
And im still the mysterious one...
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Post by zuan on Jun 17, 2008 10:40:48 GMT -5
kill me lol, read my stories im the invinsidle one stick a arrow throgh me i take it out and stixck it up your backside.
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Post by ty2toon on Jun 18, 2008 5:52:29 GMT -5
bio.... your still waiting to kill us
Sorry this is taking so long, i'm not home and that's where i wrote my story, sorry!
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Post by ty2toon on Jun 29, 2008 22:19:08 GMT -5
sorry 4 dbl. post but here's chap.1, BTW, jester.... you're still hollow, alright??I will change mine to Blood.And another note, Blood Ty is a Gun-Mage, and finally, Aleex, you're Alex.
[glow=navy,2,300]Chapter 1-The Standoff
Neo drew the pistol and shot the ranger in the leg who fired at Zuan and disabled his arm with a poison bullet.
The wizard leader, Ty, came in with a rifle,while yelling "Who are you!?" at the ranger coming up behind him, at the same time the ranger pulled another pistol on Ty.
Zuan, using his able arm, picked up Artix's God Blade and ran up to the stage which stoped quite a way into the room. The fight was in the very back, probably 15ft. from the podium, but Zuan spun the blade in circles deflecting the bullets distracted the ranger so Ty could reveal who was behind the hood, Alex was the ranger.
Neo shot at Alex's head and Alex fell to the ground. "Traitor!" screeched Zuan and Ty. By now Ty had the rifle at Neo's heart. Neo had a gun at Zuan, who was still twirling the dull blade, and Ty. Neo suddenly fell to the groundf with a dagger in his back. [/glow]
There's another double post after this maybe, sorry.
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Post by Jester (Bio.) on Jun 29, 2008 22:24:18 GMT -5
So many guns, so many weapons. Makes me wonder who is going to die first. And who's going to die next?
Interesting never-the-less. Continue writing.
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Post by ty2toon on Jun 29, 2008 22:27:45 GMT -5
well neo's dead.... maybe, EBIL-NESS!!!!!!
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Post by kbolt56 on Jun 29, 2008 23:44:36 GMT -5
am i in this?
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Post by ty2toon on Jun 30, 2008 7:19:19 GMT -5
yes^
[glow=navy,2,300]Chapter 2a-The Liar Paladin And The Truthful Ranger[/i]
No one noticed where Alex had lain was piled with armour, the face mask was dented. Alex smiled as he threw a second dagger at the dead Neo, but as the dagger closed in on him, he dissapeared. "Where in God's holy name is he Alex?" Zuan demanded. Alex replied,"To Artix's emergency base, a base with a big.... I've said too much...." his voice leaving audible volume. "Big what?" Ty demanded! "A bomb!" Alex said quitetly. "We need out, Artix's fellow palidins cept` me are coming to kill us!" Zuan exclaimed angrily. "The vents in my school room lead out" Ty remarked, "Let's go then!" Alex exclaimed.[/glow] [/size][/font][/color]
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Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 13:10:21 GMT -5
the second chapter is a littile to short it seems to be the beginign of a chapter
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Post by ty2toon on Jul 3, 2008 8:33:25 GMT -5
It's part one of a chapter.^
Well BE, this is what you want
YOU'RE GONNA DIE!!!!!!!!!
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Post by ty2toon on Jul 5, 2008 6:04:44 GMT -5
new chapter!
[glow=navy,2,300]Chapter 2b- The Liar Paladin And The Truthful Ranger!
"Sooo.... let meget this straight, Artix was plotting all our deaths?" Zuan pondered the idea and kept asking the question as Alex pried open the vents."Shut up Zuan!" Ty yelled while the leader of the Dragon Lords, Edge, walked right on in. The vent cover fell."Alex, cover us" said as Ty ripped the drawer open giving him a light dagger.Ty was first in the vent, while Alex, knowing how to duplicate daggers, hung Edge on the wall and edge ripped an arm off the wall to peirce a dagger through both of them. "Oh God no!" Zuan cried as he tried and healed Alex, Edge looked over and said"You're almost too late, but you're ready to fight.", he then smiled and hang where he got stabbed and bled to death.[/glow]
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Post by ty2toon on Jul 7, 2008 15:47:34 GMT -5
helloooo!!!*echoes* a new chapter was released!
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Post by bloodedge on Jul 7, 2008 15:49:11 GMT -5
I GOT DEADY-FIED!!! ;D
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Post by ty2toon on Jul 7, 2008 15:50:20 GMT -5
you're welcome^!
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Post by metaknight on Jul 7, 2008 18:10:00 GMT -5
Errrrrr.....wow. Simply...wow. The terminator would be proud. *uses dimensional cape and disappears into the clan database*
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Post by kbolt56 on Jul 7, 2008 18:22:01 GMT -5
is still waiting to be put in.
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Post by ty2toon on Jul 7, 2008 20:26:54 GMT -5
next chapter bolt!^
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Post by ty2toon on Jul 21, 2008 21:13:43 GMT -5
did anyone ever read he new chapter!?
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