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Post by metaknight on Aug 16, 2008 15:40:22 GMT -5
Freakin sweet! For meta knights! So classic.
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Post by ty2toon2 on Aug 16, 2008 15:41:12 GMT -5
Wow. Amazing, i've only read part though.
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Post by zuan on Aug 16, 2008 15:45:09 GMT -5
I'm Glad you liek it, anyone who has played oblivion knows my father is actully the guy you make/play. Infact i made him and am playing him! His Undead dog liked it. If you wnat to look up the guys if you don't play oblivion look for the elderscrolls wiki, liek the df one. type in Lex,Bauris,Glenroy,Burd or Jaufree and find out what part they played. Next chapter will come in 15 minuites
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Post by metaknight on Aug 16, 2008 15:52:56 GMT -5
Ooo, Another chapter already??? *crosses fingers* please use galaxia, please use galaxia.....
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Post by zuan on Aug 16, 2008 16:32:39 GMT -5
Chapter 3-Bane Of Zuan "Your realated to Burd.. i thoght he bit the dust against the daedra?" "My father did... but not my mother or my uncle" "Look Meta.... We were heading to Bruma what is the situation there?" "Bad news.... Ocoto sent me. he said you had broken out of prision and told me to kill you." Meta drew his blade Galaxia. Then pointed it to the unprotected chest of Zuan. "Will you kill me?" "No. It seems your time in prision has weakend your powers, Meaning that the gates are opening again." "What? Now? Were?" "Not Yet But The Arch Mage predicted it." Then the 3 men got on there horses and began to ride away from Bruma. The small battalon that followed were not as armed as there master only with Silver long swords and Steel armour. "Zuan. The few men of the Kings that our left are meeting back at your old Castle, Zenalakes. We have all your fathers armour ready and the blade that slayed him aswell ready for use." "What do they call this blade?" "The Bane Of Zuan."
The men continued South towards the location however before they reached the end of the woods near Corrol they stopped and entered a Casam. At the End of this Casam was a bright Red door guarded by a old crumbeled Guard. They passed the guard but Anatas swore it's eyes moved as he passed it's learing gaze. They then went throgh the gateway arriving in a small citidel, Zenalakes. "Zuan..surley enemys must work out were the gate is." "Ofcourse they do." "Then why isint there a amss invasion." "The portal Guardian sees who passes him, he decides were they go and how they get there." "How they Get there?" "Yes we had one accassion when a spy of the enemy got here by walking on air. when he got above the castle it dropped him."
The 3 main men walked throgh the gates and into a golden hall on the walls were Swords and in cases golden helms and jeweled armours. "We knew it was a matter of time." Said a Dark Horse Voice A man in Bilowing white and golden robes walked into the room throgh a small passageway it was the arch-mage Tyvation. Next to apear was the Wood Elf Alex, his armour was dragonhide with a golden tint, he had a Daedric bow and over 10,000 arows in his pouch. Next to him was the Dark Elf Boltakon he unlike tyvation was in Black robes with a lining of skulls in his hand was the Staff of Dawn, he was a Necromancer but freind to the group. Lastly an Aragonian entered the room under the name of Bioshock, half of his face was black and dead but the other half was red and orange. He wore Black Chain mail with a Body plate of skulls linked together by a spell created by the daedric Lord himself.
"Anatas. There is a room of the hall for you. You will find some clothes,blade and armour in your room, ring the bell for a maid if you need one." Said Tyvation "Meta, Zuan, Ocoto is becomign dangerous and arrogant, we will have a meeting shortly Zuan, Meta you know were your Rooms are, meet us in the Hall in 20 minuites, we must take action!" Said Tyvation again.
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Post by ty2toon2 on Aug 16, 2008 21:16:31 GMT -5
Yay! I'm an Arch-Mage!!!!!! ULTIMATE PWNING POWERS ACTIVAE!!!!! *Pwns Alex in one poke!*
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Post by metaknight on Aug 17, 2008 13:09:18 GMT -5
Awesome, I used galaxia! This story is getting interesting.....
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Post by zuan on Aug 30, 2008 16:01:39 GMT -5
Chapter 4- Bane, Zuan and the sword called Bane Of Zuan
Anatas walked over to Zuan and asked another question. "Every one is talking about the 'Bane Of Zuan' Your called Zuan and bane means ruin. so why do you wield it?" "Anatas. the blade does not mean me but my great grandfather and his brother. they were called Bane and Zuan. Bane was a more mischievous, troublesome boy, whilst Zuan was the Law keeper, the snitch." "The snitch, those dirty little double crossing....oh year the story"
"Anyway a few years after there 18th birthday they set out into the shivering isles. Killed the gate keeper but went there separate ways. Zuan went into the good side whilst his brother went into the Dark side. A few years latter both men had recovered a set of Armour. Zuan had recovered Amber his brother Madness." "But you can get them now any time, any were."
"Yes but there are 2 factors. they are the founders of the amours and they both contained magical powers. Zuan's gave him extra abilities in living making him immortal and able to fly, whilst his brothers made him stronger, more powerful and more deadly. By this time there was going to be a battle Madness VS Goodness. Sheogorath had died causing the balance to change and meaning an all out war broke out. Zuan and bane fought each other but neither could kill the other. Not until Zuan knocked the blade from Banes hand did one man fall. Bane's hellish abilities summoned a new blade a Claymore, a madness claymore with the ability to take life in one blow. It stuck Zuan and killed him."
"Not until the end of the battle did the bade turn on Bane and take his hart." "His heart, but what does any of this have to do with whats happening now." "Bane has been reincarnated but is weak with out his Armour that stands behind us. The claymore is still missing believed to be loosed. However if he gets the Armour he can summon it from any were"
To be continued
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Post by bloodedge on Sept 4, 2008 10:27:24 GMT -5
FRICKING BRILLIANT!!!
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Post by zuan on Sept 5, 2008 13:10:32 GMT -5
thx i would try to send this to a publisher but it copywrited (c) well oblivion is.
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Post by zuan on Sept 6, 2008 18:09:56 GMT -5
Chapter 4 Continued[/u]
"You understand now, anatas?" "Yes...but Zuan these men explain more..." "Arch Mage Tyvation would know more. We have a theory that Bane's spirit has been re-summoned by a rogue Mage." "Like the necromancers?" "Yes. Tyvation seems to think so. This is why i am concerned for our own Necromancer Champion, he must be careful, Tyvation can go over the top sometimes...."
Then in walked Bioshock, followed by Alex,Tyvation and Meta. They sat around the circler table and waited. Around 5 minutes later the necromancer Boltakan walked in. He sat in the only remaining chair and faced the rest of the group. "Zuan, it seems that ocoto has been taken over by someone else, we believe it is banes soul but we cannot be entirely sure. We also have news of rising cults like the mythic dawn re awakening." "Tyvation" said Alex "It seems that Oblivion gates are starting to appear. only a few but the men of choroll cannot hold 3 gates alone."
"By d**n it Zuan!! this has gone wrong. The court has failed you." shouted Alex "Yes but we can sill fight to do what Zuan did before me. Tyvation send a legion of Wizards to the choroll mages guild. Make sure no one stops you. Meta how are your men coping in The west?" "My meta knights, large amounts and as skilled as we are are being pushed back. I fear we may have lost anvil to the daedra and Skinrad and Kvatch could be next....."
"Then i think it is time, the court must be re awoken from the slumber it was in." "It is time we speak the oath together." "The time to call them back, has turned an easy arrest. The army of the daedra has come back through the gate. Martin died to save us and now he is in vain. Blood surges back through my body as i remove this searing Pain! The court is back and ready again the steeds ready to muster, now let us fight the daedra in the golden Cluster. Zuan oh mighty Zuan the first we call on you. Take your grandsons body and re awaken the King of Champions and Founder of this mighty Court!"
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Post by zuan on Sept 8, 2008 16:08:32 GMT -5
Chapter 5- To Be or Not to Be
Tyvation Awoke with a start, he as in the arcane university, all was well, the students were talking whilst the scholars were busy making new potions for there next lessons. Tyvation walked down the steps and into the court yard. He saw a dunmer walk towards him and engage him in conversation. They discussed the homework assignment from one of the mages on Rune stones and Welkard Stones, 5 minutes later the dunmer walked off. Tyvation continued his walk and out bast the 2 battle mages towards the city. As he opened the gate he saw in horror that the Bridge was gone and a Oblivion Gate on the other side. Then he heard the dunmers voice but higher and in a louder voice. "For Lord Dagon!" "Everyone retreat to the Tower! This is not a drill the daedra are back prepare for War!"
Tyvation ran back in and was pushed into the tower. "Master Tyvation Gates have opened outside the Tower, we are trapped" "thanks for stating the obvious Polious. Now get all Apprentices to the second floor. Maven and Selcious and Yourself go with them. Make any potions or enchantments as you can." "and yourself....?" "Me, Bosmen, Grendal, Vaction and Anatas will hold them up. Send my wife and son to the top floor, see if we have any teleportation crystals left. Use them on anyone who wishes to run may do so."
10 minutes later positions were set Bosmer and Grendal were stationed behind 2 over turned bookcases. Tyvation and Anatas either side of the main entrance and Vaction was standing on the portal to warn the others if they were loosing. Then there was a bang at the door and then a red daedric axe appeared through the door. "Shield Spells!" "Stuff your Crappy Spells!" Shouted Anatas Then He ran at the door and began sticking his sword through the door and into the daedra on the other side. Then the a sword was stuck into Anatas leg and then the other. "Sorry Anatas tell the others. What we have Learned tell Boltakon Primo De-cello Makradona" Then he threw the telloportaion crystal at Anatas and he was gone. As he did so he was caught of guard as the daedra broke through. Then an arrow was fired and it hit Vaction in the forehead. Bosmer was then struck down the back by a battle axe, however Grendal in his range ran at the oncoming daedra who grabbed him and cut his arms off and left him to bleed to death.
Tyvation telloported to the next level, the rest of the mages guild killed all that came in after Tyvation until in came Boltakan. "Don't fire! what news do you bring?" "I came as soon as i heard. The daedra let me through? Seems as if the necromancers have joined the daedra." "news on the fighters guild" "Bad news. The men scattered the chorrol hall is the last standing Azzan is leading the defense with Bioshock and Sheeva." "What about the meta knights have they returned?" "No we founded 20 of them dead in the remnants of an Oblivion gate. There 1000's surly match the daedra"
"get the rest of them to the top floor or get em out of here. Here are some extra Teloportation Crystals." The rest other than tyvation and Boltikan teloported. Then there was a massive bang and Boltakan mutated and turned into Bane. "Bane?" "Yes idiot....." "Boltakan is my slave now his body is mine and is soul is chained. Same with Bioshock. He will soon demise the fighters guild!" "You still have not stopped Zuan though or his 2 servants of salvation." "Do you mock me? Mortal?" "I may mock you....but nothing you can do will finish Zuan." "Zuan is man not soul, the spirit of my brother is locked away only the gathering of the 7 can heal him." "It's all ready happened last month. Me,Bioshock,Anatas,Alex,Boltakain,Sir Meta and Zuan. His soul is free and Zuan's body and mind is more powerful than before."
"So it may be..... but i can still kill him. All i need is my Armour and to destroy his...." "Late again... Zuan has both armours and the Bane Of Zuan. In fact Bane of Zuan has been disembeld. All 7 of us received part of your blade and armour. The Helm,Curiass,Right Arm,Left Arm,Boots,Gauntlets,Cape" "And mines not on me. Because i'v seen this and this is my death." Then bane drew his sword and cut off tyvations head. then his body fell through the window behind and into the plains of Oblivion.
He woke with a start. "Is he ok?" Said Meta "My freind you have been out for a few hours what happened?" 2I saw my own death, Bane killing me, The fall of the mages and fighters guild and the rise of the necromancers, Bioshock and Kbolt being controlled and taken over by Bane." "What" Shouted Bioshock "How long have we got?" "1 month" replied Tyvation in a nervous voice.
To Be Continued
Pleas Comment before the enxt chapter! Im happy to awnser Questions!
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Post by bloodedge on Sept 8, 2008 16:14:44 GMT -5
Sweeeeeeet!!!!!!! So, did I get killed or just get wounded in both legs?
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Post by zuan on Sept 9, 2008 11:51:52 GMT -5
Wounded, Wait this is a spoiler.......
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Post by zuan on Sept 12, 2008 13:51:31 GMT -5
Chapter 6- Bane's Mark
"1 Month!" Exclaimed Anatas "We must stop this." Shouted Boltakin "We do not stop, we do not worry." The 6 turned to see Zuan sitting in his chair. "Times are changing. My grand fathers power is in my vains. I also saw a vision. A vision of 1 Trator among the 7. 1 Man determined to live that he will try to kill me and he will sucseed." "We not only have 1 month till Tyvations death, but mine aswell." "I cannot take this!" Shouted Meta "Henrik. We are leaving get the men ready." "Yes m'lord." "And so Bane's Mark has allready Struck" Said Zuan in a whisper so no one could hear him.
With the departure of the Meta Knights and Tyvation trying to stop the inevertable the 7 had fallen to 5. Boltikan was seen leaving the sanctury at midnight with Bioshock every night and rumors were spreading that they were traitors. However Alex,Anatas and Zuan were keeping a level head. They had disided that even if they could not convinice Ocoto of the disaster at there door, they could tell the count and countesses of each town. Alex was sent to the western towns, Kvatch,Skinrad and Anvil. Anatas went south to Bravil and Leigawin. Zuan went to The northen towns Choroll,Cheydanhall and Bravil. However only a few of the Towns belived there story. Skinrad,Kvatch, Bruma and Cheydinhall Agreed whilst the others seemed to belive that the gates had been closed years ago beacuse of martin's sacrifice.
One day after the return of the 3 men news had arrived that Ocoto was Dead. It was said that he fell from his balcony into the meeting hall below. The new High Chancillor was named Piglaton he was half dark elf and half Breton. He also had a personal bodyguard called Wvarmate. Unlike Ocoto however Piglaton belived in the oblivion gates as he was Arch Mage at the time. His bodyguard was a orc. He wore Gold and Black heavy armour like Zuan's. According to Zuan they were his mentors and freinds before the discovery of Zuan's granfather's armour. Now however the 3 Servants of Salvation were ready to Stop the gates and Fix Cyrodill back to it's former glory. However Bane was already back.
To be continued
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Post by metaknight on Sept 13, 2008 12:23:03 GMT -5
Nice chapters, but why did The Meta-Knights depart?Will they be back??
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Post by zuan on Sept 14, 2008 3:58:13 GMT -5
your scared.... i cannot reveal if you come back in this story or the sequal.
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Post by metaknight on Sept 18, 2008 16:00:29 GMT -5
I...am.....WHAT?! I am fearless!! i do not get scared in the face of the ultimate doom!!! Grrrr.... *Angry face*
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Post by kbolt56 on Sept 19, 2008 20:10:59 GMT -5
Fearless my foot. Anyway I'm probably the traitor necromancers always are.
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Post by metaknight on Sept 19, 2008 22:34:53 GMT -5
I am fearless, I tricked you before so there. But, if I must run like a coward xuan, then make me run like a coward. *faceplam*
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