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Post by zuan on Jun 28, 2008 10:48:12 GMT -5
Story One
This is all between episode 3 and 4
before i start this i wish to know who wants to eb in ti as a jedi or a sith. just reply here with the info i will start in less than 24 hours.
Name: Jedi/Sith Name: Jedi or Sith: Jedi Rank (Jedi Only): Die or Live: Background: Jedi/Sith Master: Padwans:
so this is me
Name: Zuan Jedi/Sith Name: Bane Knight Jedi or Sith: Jedi Jedi Rank (Jedi Only): Jedi Knight Die or Live: Live Background: As a young boy he was picked up by Shi Ting and was taken to couresont were he was avalued to become a jedi, his master Kit Fisto deid after the betrail of The Sith Lord. He led many rebbelions against the sith. He and the last rebel Jedi's are being trained by some hidden Jedi's like Yoda and Set Duak. Jedi/Sith Master: Kit Fisto/Set Duak Padwans:N/A
i will start the story in less than 24 hours when i get enotgh applicants you may join half way throgh but best to join from the start.
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 28, 2008 13:48:04 GMT -5
Name: Bloodedge.
Jedi/Sith Name: Anatas.
Jedi or Sith: Kind of Sith - nothing to do with them. Can't I just say Dark?
Jedi Rank (Jedi Only): N/A.
Die or Live: Live. Unlike Bloodedge, Anatas is my heart.
Background: No-one knows much about him, though he's a dark Jedi who has surpassed most other users of the Force, though he prefers to observe. Despite this, he is a fearsome fighter, with and without a lightsaber (which he does not use, instead, he weilds a cortorsis weave [so it can fight lightsabers] black blade, with a blood valve in the hilt]) He's so powerful that against most Jedi, he simply looks at them, and he can scrape the force out of their veins so they writhe on the ground. This only works against users of the Force though. But his blade, this controls him. If he does not feed it, it turns on him.
Jedi/Sith Master: None.
Padwans: None.
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Post by zuan on Jun 28, 2008 14:40:33 GMT -5
This will eb amence story blood shall we write a chapter each?
so
1st chapter me 2nd you 3rd me 4th you
and so on. also you can be a jedi bounty hunter.
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 28, 2008 16:46:39 GMT -5
Hmm...Good idea!! Partners?
And I hunt the Jedi? Interesting...
We'll have to get a story-line set out. PM me it if you have one. Though I could probably take it from where you left off pretty easily.
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Post by saibot on Jun 28, 2008 17:11:09 GMT -5
Name:Obi-Don
Jedi/Sith Name:Obi-Don
Jedi or Sith:Sith exetemeist
Die or Live:I dont care
Background:Born to be a sith Obi-Don was trained to be a sith warrior from a very young age. His force powers were phonmanal and beacame a rapidly ranking sith. Finally he reached the rank of sith lord and is ready to raise chaos for the good of the sith.
Jedi/Sith Master:Darth sai Padwans:N/A
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Post by kbolt56 on Jun 29, 2008 9:22:11 GMT -5
Name:bolt Jedi/Sith Name: bolt Jedi or Sith: sith master Jedi Rank (Jedi Only): Die or Live: live Background: meh i will think of one later Jedi/Sith Master: none Padwans: none
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Post by zuan on Jun 29, 2008 13:25:33 GMT -5
Episode 3.1- The Rebel's Viccan
Prolouge
It was a gloomy night and Darth Bolt and Darth Vader were pacing up the corridor. "Master Vader, there are littile jedi left and they are scattered, we have already one!" "For a Sith Lord you show in experince Ha, the battle is not one until the eath star is complite and all jedi's including Yoda are dead." "That is true Vader and we have an army of sith ready and waiting on tatoween to take out Bane Kinght and his master Set Duak."
About 50 billion light years away on a small and dusty waistland of a planet 15 slick black ships landed on Tatoween, Out came Obi Don and around 500 other Sith aprentices and at the front was Bolt. "have no mercy any sign of resistance kill, any hidden jedi's must die!" Then like a black cloud they coverd tatoween and were ranskaing the enitre area, in 15 minuites tatowwen was taken.
However a small abnd of fighters were approching. On Speeder bikes "Remember everything i tought you as today we go into battle" the group of rebles and the 2 jedi's flew to tatoween.
Blood Will Continue
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Post by saibot on Jun 29, 2008 17:08:38 GMT -5
So far so good ;D
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 30, 2008 10:30:38 GMT -5
Me likies very muchies! I'll get onto writing the next chapter now!
P.S. - also, BloodCatcher? Is that Ty2oon?
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 30, 2008 11:48:45 GMT -5
As the speeders approached, the Sith turned to the nearing cloud of dust. "Sir, enemy reinforcements, sir!" shouted out Lieutenant Kl'rud. "Awaiting orders and force, Lord Bolt, sir!" "Shoot to kill," Bolts cold whisper spread across the battle field, quiet yet commanding. "Kill them all!" "They've seen us, sir!" shouted out Gunnery Sergeant Rort, an expert with heavy weaponry for the rebels. He was a native to Tatooine, originally a sand-person. He had been adopted by Bolts sister at an early age, when he was found lost and wondering. "What should we do sir?" "We fight," answered Sek. They reached the battlefield, and the two Jedi launched themselves off of their bikes. Bane leapt up and activated his lightsaber. A blinding watery blue light spilled out, and sliced off the head of a Sith soldier, and opened up the bellies of two others. The blood of the first washed over Bane, but the heat of his weapon was so intense that the second and third's blood has dried up instantaneously. Bane looked back, and saw his speeder spear two Sith and crash into a dune. Someone had had been caught by the back of it was flung and propelled at least 4 klicks. Then the bike exploded, and flames flooded the battlefield. Five blazing, armoured bodies flying through the air. Bane manipulated them with the Force into multiple groups. He turned, and saw his Master cornered by three Sith apprentices. Their crimson lightsaber blades reminded him of blood. Fearing for his Sek, Bane launched unnaturally high and fast towards his fellow teacher, and sliced one's arm off. He then clashed with the others lightsaber, and they glowed hungrily. There was a sharp swish as his fellow cut down the other Dark Warrior. He struggled against his opponent, and then sent him through the air with the Force. He turned, and many more Acolytes. "What are we going to do Master? There's at least three-hundred of them," he enquired. "Well, that's going to even the odds a little. How should we do this? One-hundred-and-fifty each, or see who gets the most? Oh, and by the way, stop stealing my thunder," answered Sek Duat. "Bring it on." They jumped into the embrace of battle.
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Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 12:05:01 GMT -5
As The Battle raged on 4 more black crafts landed and the few rebels and the Jedi's fell back. the dust was rising as another ship landed however Sek Duat pushed it back into the sky. Bane was cutting through the onslaught of Sith.
As he used his force powers to create a way through to a black ship another ship landed a golden and crimson ship and off came the Jedi Hunter Anatas, with his black robes and cape with his 4 arms, 2 robotic he Drew 4 red light sabers. "i give a message from Corrosont any blade wielders must die!" he chopped in half another 2 siths however collided into The Sith Lord Sai and his apprentice Obi-Don, Blood Drew his double ended blade whilst Obi-Don drew his red Blade, however Anatas cut Lord Sai in half and proceeded to wards his apprentice, whilst this was happening Set Duak and his apprentice managed to escape in a Black Rouge 86, All there troops were dead.
Anatas launched his swords at Obi Don but was stooped by The Sith Lord and Leader bolt who drew his blades, he had 8 arms and so he had 8 blades. He and Anatas went blade to blade as they thought for Alpha supremacy. Then Anatas kicked Bolt off the cliff side and retreated to his own Space craft, however from the cliff climbed bolt who used the force and stuck the 4 light sabers owned by Anatas into there master. He collapsed, stone cold. The 50 Siths left retreated to 5 ships and rose and blasted off into the distance. "Darth Vader. Anatas came as expected he is dead." "Good then we will succeed, no Jedi or Rouge can stop us!"
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 30, 2008 13:42:31 GMT -5
Chapter 3 Anatas lay cold on the scorched battlefield, sand churning and swirling around him. His two cybernetic arms sparked. Besides from that, the only noise was the low humming of his dying sabers. Two people came across the dunes. One was Bane, and the other was a small, green alien, which waddled across the burning ground. They both donned light brown robes to allow air to cool them. "Here is the one, Master Yoda," Bane said. Apparently Yoda was the small green man. "Ah, the Force is strong in this one," Yoda commented, "Though hatred fills him. Save you, this one did?" "Yes, Master, in a manner. He cut down the enemies ranks while we were fighting. Perhaps those he killed may have killed us otherwise, though I highly doubt it." "Hmm..." Yoda mumbled while he inspected the corpse. "To the speeders we must take him." It would have been impossible for most people to drag Anatas 2 clicks to the speeders, but Bane was not ordinary. He moved Anatas with ease, the only exception when the sparks hit him. Bane heaved Anatas onto the back of his battle-notched, burnt Dark Speeder. Then he and Yoda mounted it, and sped off to a secluded settlement for an experiment...
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Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 14:39:44 GMT -5
Back at There cruiser above tatoween, The Little Green man,Yoda was sitting with Bane and Sek Duat. Meanwhile R4-Q1 and C4Q0 were attempting to heal and revive Anatas. "Pad wan, I think ti is time to say this, you have become an excellent student, and i do believe it is time to give you a proper light saber, so we have given you 4. A Green, 2 blues and 1 purple light sabers. As we know you and Atanas are like each other. however you still have 4 complete arms. Half human, Half Android, you look so human expert the 4 arms....." "thank you Master, I will ex el with my ability's and our new Friend at our side, We will take down Vader,Bolt and Obi-Don." "Sek it is time you must leave your pod is ready." said Yoda in a small voice. "what? your leaving....." "I'm afraid so young one. i am going to the front lines, with Yoda in separate pods to Kasheiki were we intend to free trapped wookies" With that they left, Then he saw 2 pods being realized. Then fear struck him as a black cruiser came out of the darkness, It fired a red beam to wards Sek Duats Pod and it hit, the pod exploded and sek's body with it to. Then the black Ship connected with The ship Bane was in and out came troopers. 1 shot at bane who did nor draw his blade quick enougth, however it was blocked by Anatas. "quickly my friend we must leave."
To Be Contiued......By Blood
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Post by kbolt56 on Jun 30, 2008 14:49:56 GMT -5
i got eight arms?
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Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 15:18:48 GMT -5
yer, you have, you multiply body parts at will.
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Post by kbolt56 on Jun 30, 2008 15:44:18 GMT -5
sweet
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Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 15:46:29 GMT -5
lol me and blood are half human half androide were genral grevious but with a human skin over us. yet we have human feelings. were human but were super strong,fast,smart,4 armed.
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 30, 2008 15:49:44 GMT -5
YAY!
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Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 15:55:32 GMT -5
So the next part will eb writen by exelent top of the class author BloodEdge.
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 30, 2008 15:58:19 GMT -5
Tommorrow! And thanks for the compliment (even though it's directed so I "get to it" quicker), you're not so bad yourself...
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