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Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 16:01:38 GMT -5
If you want blood you cna make a new topic called Authors with there names and links to all there sotries they ave writen.
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 30, 2008 16:02:14 GMT -5
Okay, I'll do that!
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Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 16:12:59 GMT -5
Well done that is perfect your are becomign a great memebr and as i said last week sooner we get more members the sooner ul be an admin.
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 30, 2008 16:15:25 GMT -5
Why thank you and - me, an admin? Oh! tears of joy!
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Post by saibot on Jun 30, 2008 16:17:09 GMT -5
Owwww obi sai got more credit than obi don
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Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 16:24:09 GMT -5
lol Obi Sai is dead, you will come in ti later im hoping to write 10 storys if that is ok with blood, but we all must die in the 10th as none of us are in starwars episode 4.
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 30, 2008 16:34:26 GMT -5
Yeah, that's fine with me. And we don't have to "die", per sey. We could "disappear", or something.
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Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 16:39:13 GMT -5
I think Die is better however as it gives more spin on the story but we could disaer however after that star wars is over as the sith is gone.
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 30, 2008 16:41:02 GMT -5
Yeah, you're right...
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Post by saibot on Jun 30, 2008 19:02:41 GMT -5
Hey hey everybody knows (Whither they admit it or not) that Jedi are the most powerful. But sith look cooler
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Post by kbolt56 on Jun 30, 2008 22:34:49 GMT -5
they are equal there just two different sides of the same coin
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Post by bloodedge on Jul 1, 2008 10:36:10 GMT -5
I've completed them both on all sides (even neutral).
But this thread is for the story. If you want to discuss KOTOR make a thread in Real-Life chat. Please delete your messages before I do it for you.
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Post by zuan on Jul 1, 2008 14:55:33 GMT -5
Are you writing your story?
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Post by bloodedge on Jul 1, 2008 14:57:05 GMT -5
Word has locked down. I honestly do not know why. I might have to save it as a notepad.
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Post by zuan on Jul 1, 2008 14:58:18 GMT -5
Do it! I wnat to read it, this is god as the other writer can also suprize you.
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Post by bloodedge on Jul 1, 2008 15:04:28 GMT -5
Do it! I wnat to read it, this is god as the other writer can also suprize you.
Lol, I'm trying. And it's not going to be too big of a twist
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Post by zuan on Jul 1, 2008 15:58:27 GMT -5
WELL HARDER TRY HARDER TRY.
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Post by kbolt56 on Jul 2, 2008 0:00:06 GMT -5
....you must really want to read that.
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Post by zuan on Jul 2, 2008 11:38:09 GMT -5
yer well i have my prt to write and iv got the coolest idea ever.
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Post by bloodedge on Jul 2, 2008 15:26:05 GMT -5
Chapter 5 As Anatas spoke, Bane Force-pushed a wave of at least twenty troopers into a corridor, crushing the next unfortunates who were rushing to the commotion. "We must hurry," commanded Bane, and he and Anatas readied to leave, when the heard sparks from the other side of the room. The two droids who had attempted to heal Anatas were melting from unnatural heat. "You did that, Anatas?" enquired Bane. "You are even more powerful than I thought." "I may be, but not even our entwined powers could shield us from a blast from that Black Cruiser." Bane silently agreed, and they both hurried out into the corridor, picking through the corpses that littered the floor. While Bane thought it was a shame they had to die, Anatas believed that they were a waste of life, treacherous scum. They fought their way towards the Escape Pods through scores of enemies, though they seemed to replace one-another almost instantly. The plain white armour became scorched, dented, sliced and ultimately destroyed. They reached the bridge of the ship. There were several Sith holding the ship up, perhaps for capture, perhaps just until they captured and killed the survivors. As they entered, the enemies turned, and started blasting. One of the shots hit a thick, tube-wire. Sparks flew from it, hit a control panel, which blew up. Then the glass started cracking, and the fire stopped. Everybody looked at the pane for a moment that seemed to stretch to an eternity. Then, it finally broke away in a violent swirl, along with most of the bridge, everything falling into the black vacuum of space. Bane and Anatas were launched towards it, but just managed to grab hold of a bar. The one that Anatas held became dented, and started giving way. "No!" shouted Bane. "Hang on! I'll come and get you!" "No," called Anatas, "You'll die too!" And at that, he let go off the bar. "No!" Bane shouted as Anatas whirled away into the airless night. After he had disappeared from view, huge metal covers locked down over the space where the windows had been. Bane looked at them for a few seconds, then his training kicked in. He opened the door and fought his way to the escape pods. As he reached the last remaining pod, he looked around, just in case. Suddenly, there was a loud metallic bang from above, and Anatas fell from the ducts. "Hi," he said. "Good to see you're still alive." Bane was surprised - which didn't often happen. "How -" "Not now! Later." And with that, he opened the pod's hatch and threw Bane in.
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