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The Sea
Jun 30, 2008 16:29:33 GMT -5
Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 16:29:33 GMT -5
The Sea is like the midnight sky
Dark and Grey
Both they move foward and back
Going from White to Black
As you sit and watch them move
It gives you time to sooth
The Sea is like the sky
Soft and Hard
Quick and Slow
But who really knows
The sea is like the sky
Unable to be cuped in hands
They Both are there but not for long
As they move like a beutiful Song
The Sea is like the midnight sky
They Change at Night
As they do so they sleep right out of sight
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The Sea
Jun 30, 2008 16:35:43 GMT -5
Post by bloodedge on Jun 30, 2008 16:35:43 GMT -5
Rather short, but this proves the saying "Quality, not quantity". Well done, I applaud you.
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The Sea
Jun 30, 2008 16:36:31 GMT -5
Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 16:36:31 GMT -5
It is longer it is in my english book that is at school me and my mate did it.
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The Sea
Jun 30, 2008 16:38:45 GMT -5
Post by bloodedge on Jun 30, 2008 16:38:45 GMT -5
Cool, I want to see the rest of it if it's possible.
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The Sea
Jun 30, 2008 16:40:25 GMT -5
Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 16:40:25 GMT -5
yer il ahve to copy it down as we don't take our books home i have the lesson on wednesday so il send the rest on here wedsday night
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The Sea
Jun 30, 2008 16:43:08 GMT -5
Post by bloodedge on Jun 30, 2008 16:43:08 GMT -5
'K, thanks!
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The Sea
Jun 30, 2008 16:45:41 GMT -5
Post by zuan on Jun 30, 2008 16:45:41 GMT -5
btw check the starwars post.
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