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Post by zuan on Jun 9, 2008 15:12:37 GMT -5
ok im goign to do a clan stry called when classes colide it will eb started after i do my german homeowrk......(may be never)
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Post by zuan on Jun 9, 2008 16:05:11 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]prologue
Time were Changing Men were Aging Dynasties were Devouring
in these times measures were taken by the 5 guilds to unite the guilds in 1 building. to stop dynasties and times changing for the worst. the 5 men gathered 1 foggy day inside a golden building coated with shields,swords and blades. "I Sir Krieger, lord of the Paladins, agree with sed Mancer" "So it will be the rangers will come out and fight by men." "That us skeletons and beasts will die beside light" "us wizards will combine for a new age" "we 5 leaders of the 5 classes unite. Paladins,Death Knights,Wizards,Rangers and Mancers alike will fight and die to protect Lore" A bang at the door, then another, then a hole and screeching and howling "the dynasty they have found us!" "necro, stay calm you 3 stay here me and D-K will check it out." as they drew towards the door, it opened and men poured in with Armour and swords. then 5 leaders were swarmed by the thousands. "Krieger screamed get my 2 children out of here!" he was stabbed through the chest by a sword and he hit the ground with a load noise.[/color]
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 9, 2008 16:06:54 GMT -5
*clap**Clap**clap* Brilliant. Better than Medieval.
I got to go now, but I'll be back tommorrow!
BTW - why isn't there a rule board thingy for this forum?
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Post by zuan on Jun 9, 2008 16:20:56 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300] chapter 1-Sons
It was day and the 2 young 12 year old boys had woken. well not the way they wanted to be woken. Mrs.Keflin woke then up at 5 am to clean out the barn and feed the pigs. there names Artix and Zuan. the boys were due to be separated later than year unknown to both of them. Artix would be sent to live in doom wood. he was the stronger and taller of the 2. whilst his younger brother was going to stay were he was.
the 2 boys had finished there work when a noise was heard by both. it sounded like take my kids and go! but Mrs.Keflin had heard nothing and nether had here own son Zak. he was older and bigger than both Artix and Zuan and used to push them into manure or drop them into pig food. he simply lathed when they asked him.The 2 boys had no idea what they had heard. they assumed they must have been imagining it and went to sleep. however there dream was the same thing.
11 years ago. Krieger hit the floor with a crash. his Axe next to him. The army then slayed D-K and took his fabled sword. they smashed it into 1 thousand pieces. the other 3 retreated up the staircase. the wizard and mancer summoning anything to hold the army off but it was no use. the 3 men were executed. there bodies dismantled and the golden palace burnt. over the next 50,000 years the palace would freeze up and become the ice palace used by Queen Warrior. After the point when the castle was burnt the boys both woke. they turned and screamed. Between them was a man who grabbed both the children, and threw them in the back of his carriage outside. it was more of a cadge, no windows no seats just bars.
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Post by kbolt56 on Jun 9, 2008 16:37:35 GMT -5
i tip my hat to you good sir.
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Post by zuan on Jun 9, 2008 17:01:28 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300] chapter 2-separation is the hardest thing
The boys were ruffly handled and as they were chained to the cage, they saw the house burn in front of them probably both there annoying adopted brother and hardworking adopted mother were dead. as the carriage went past a lake an arrow hit the driver who fell off his horse. the horse buckled as a man in golden Armour and a red cloak with the name champions on it unlocked the cage. He entered and untied artix. he went over to Zuan and was about to untie him when a arrow hit the horse and him in the eye. Artix rolled out and the horse plunged in the leak beside them. artix watched the cage sink with his brother trapped and tied up inside. 5 rouges came out of the bushes but were shot as they reached him. "You all right kid?" "My brother he didn't make it" "One of you did that was the main thing." "you stood there and let him die!" "keep your voice down, rogues are out at this time of knight. anyway us 5 and our dead companion there , are the 6 ranger champions in these parts." "were am i going to live" "doom wood, were your uncle and aunt live. they will keep you safe." "what about you?" "when the time is right we will see you gain. do me a favor, for god sake stay out of the old Guardian Tower....or it could be the last thing you ever do!" with that the 5 rangers and artix traveled through the night and arrived at Doom Wood in the morning.
As they entered the town Artix's uncle and aunt were waiting. they cried out when he arrived. once artix had went inside they talked quietly to the rangers. he heard worlds like Tower,Zuan,Lake. when he entered the room that had his name painted on hi sat on the bed. then he asked himself what would he do for the next few years.
the next few years past without incident until he met Vayle. he had trespassed int eh guardian tower and the green mist killed everyone he loved. He was saved and for the next few years lived with the lady of the land. After this he learned to wild a baled and fight for the Paladin Order. as he grew into a elderly Teen he was accepted into the Champions Court. and in his early 20's became head of the guild. his new quest was to find his lost brother.
13 years ago
"do thy Ferian Kreiger take Mary Finadan to be your lawful wife" "i do!" "then you may kis...." "Kreiger...Kreiger. Bandits are attacking the village." "OK I'm sorry my love,this will have to wait...." he got on his horse and followed the man down the hill. he saw corruption. the wizards,mancers, death knights and rangers were looting the village. the 5 most powerful orders stealing from there land. "Has the New Dynasty arrived yet?" "we are here. i take it you will fight with us then." "of course! anything to help drive away bandits!!" "FOR LORE!" they all screamed as they charged down into the enemies.
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Post by Jester (Bio.) on Jun 9, 2008 18:44:21 GMT -5
Interesting... don't forget to add my name to the story like our old clan
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Post by zuan on Jun 10, 2008 10:28:24 GMT -5
this is part 1 of it the first few chapters is the paladin lives.
anyway ur go nna get involved in the next cahpter. in fact all clan leaders are!
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Post by Jester (Bio.) on Jun 10, 2008 10:51:47 GMT -5
I call bad guy this time ! "hence" DOOM
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Post by zuan on Jun 10, 2008 10:57:14 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300] chapter-4 the Dynasty the Dynasty and Krieger went down the hill in a wave of black and white. Cutting down all Mancers,Wizards,Rangers and Knights in there way. In a few hours the 4 leaders were captured and were thrown in front of Krieger and the Dynasty Leader. as the leader brandished his sword and was about to plunge it into the wizard a voice was heard. "we Guardians of Lore refuse the deaths off Innocent Leaders." "we bersekers.....Kill...all Lore.......Betrayers!" "riders from the sky, stop this tyranny and this dynasty!" "Elves Raise Your Bows!" "Ninjas throwing stars at the ready!" there was a huge army of some of lores greatest armies. At the front was a man in Gold and Black Guardian Armour, and besides him a man sitting on a dragon in golden dragon lord Armour. then the 5 army's charged from all sides. surrounding the dynasty and Krieger. the dragons ripped through the Sky's, smashing apart the dynasty front lines. the army fell back pushing Krieger off his horse. then the army broke a hall in the men and fled. Krieger was surrounded. the Guardian Leader dismounted. "well your no Warrior of the dynasty." "what...what do you mean? this village was in trouble" " NO IT WASN'T IT WAS A TRAP TO FINALLY KILL OFF THE DYNASTY YOU IDIOT!" "look i came here to stop rouges" "you don't know do you. he doesn't know. well the dynasty plan on making Guns. a weapon that will wipe out the age of swords. our master said guns and robots died out before but he did not say why. he was then shot by a gun in the back as we fled to this town." "my name is Krieger" "well Krieger your coming with us!" "we can't have u telling anyone were we are" then they piked him up and rode off into the distance.[/glow]
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 10, 2008 14:09:15 GMT -5
Very good Zuan. You're style is improving. Keep up the good works!
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Post by zuan on Jun 11, 2008 12:44:36 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]Chapter 5- 5 years later (u get it)
Bioshock, Kbolt,Alex,Ty2toon,Artix were riding through the southern border on there steeds. The men were traveling faster than sound, They then drew there blades. as they charged head first into the snevil army. Artix threw his spear into the first snevil and pulled it out when he passed the corpse. Bioshock drew his Doom Axe and cut the snivels limb by limb. Kbolt and Ty2toon used there staffs to summon up skeletons and men alike. Alex's bow fired many arrows into the snevils hearts and heads.
A few moments later the snevils were dead. Artix dismounted to look at the snevil leader. as he did so the snevil raised his head. "let me live or your brother dies!" "how dare you talk about my brother you worm!" he picked his Axe up and cut the snevil in half. he turned to his friends and told them that Zuan had died around 5 years ago when he was plunged into a lake near doom wood. "if we go Noxus will be waiting" said Bioshock "We can get past I'm a necromancer." for the next hour they decided what to do. eventfully the next day they went to doom wood.
Inside that lake was the cage that had taken his brother to his death. As they approached it a huge barbarian man came from the other side of the forest,with a blade of Awe . he drew it and lunged at artix who raised his Axe. as bioshock joined the fight got more intense the 3 men were drawing closer to the old bridge,below it 150 miles below was a pit. then as the Barbarian parched hit he slipped but was caught by artix. "who are you?" "your voice is familiar....." "wha....." "your eyes there like mine...." "ZUAN!" the brothers looked up and hugged. a few minutes later the 6 of them charged into the distance.[/glow]
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 11, 2008 12:49:13 GMT -5
Okay, your storyline is brilliant, but you need to use commas. Then, concentrate on your spelling. Don't type as fast.
But keep practicing!
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Post by zuan on Jun 16, 2008 14:08:01 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]chapter 6-when good and evil join there can only be 1 path
notification this is in the future and there will be a few notifications to my other story on the AE forums the medieval brothers. (using chars from other peoples stories to make this around the hole clan as-well)
it was dim and there was a fight 10 years after the death of Zuan a war had started Bioshock had declared war on Zuan the II. the army's met at fallen sword hill. were Zuan the I had died. Zuanw as not alone with him was Bane, his fathers brother. there was also Alex and Ty2toon's younger brother Jacobb. however Shock was not alone with him were Bolt,Necro and even Neo. Bane drew his sword and his nephew drew his fathers gold and dragon scaled spear. then with a mighty roar Bio addressed the battle Field "for Death and blood and for Bones!" however on eh other side Zuan the II was addressing his men. "my father, your leader would never have wanted this to happen. Bane, you are the last relative to me your brothers are dead. artix and zuan!. i say we avenge them. these skeletons have killed our men and broken the champions LAW! we fight not for my father, not for the laws,not for our selfs but for the one thing we all believe in the 3 golden items! CHARGE!"
the 2 forces charged to each other Zuan II dismounted as he knocked Bio of his horse. the 2 men Rose to there feet. then ZUan II chopped bio in half. he turned and there bio was. "you devil!" he tried to strike however bio just vanished and stabbed zuan II through the neck. zuanII fell with a bang as his entire body fell to the floor. "peasant the second is never as good as the first." He walked to his horse and was met by Neo and Necro. as he did so few men charged at him. Alex,Kbolt,Ty2toon and Bane. then bane pushed Kbolt forward and stuck his blade through him. Kbolt crumbled into dust. "i thought i killed him the last time. however he keeps coming back. the devils art this is not like 15 years ago!" then bio turned and drew his doom blade, that he took from septular after he was slain by the great Krieger family. Bio then took it and raised it and hit it into Bane who dodged drew his knife and plunged it into Bio's heart. "fool i have no heart, no soul, no emotions" he took out the knife and plunged it into the stomach of Bane who fell in a pool of his own blood. then Alex fired 5 arrows into both Necro and Neo who fell knees first to the ground. then Ty2toon summoned a spirit in Armour, it was zuan I he reached into the neck of Bio and placed in there mortality. he spoke in a voice that was barley heard. "i will take your life and save my son.brother's and there men. you and me bio will walk the earth as the Friends we were 20 years ago. the days were good and now we will walk them again" then with a blast of lighting both Bio and Zuan I disappeared, whilst all the dead warriors,bane and zuanII rose there wounds healed. Kbolt got up in blue robes, necro also stood up next to his father who had died years ago. all was good but Zuan and Bio were gone for good.[/glow]
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Post by kbolt56 on Jun 19, 2008 5:55:02 GMT -5
looking good so far.
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Post by zuan on Jun 19, 2008 12:14:42 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]chapter 7- Bioshocks Spirit
2 years later after Zuan met with Artix and the Champions Court was formed. the 6 men lived happily. Bioshock in his cold Dark Castle, Kbolt in his school of sorcery, Ty2toons home of levitation. Alex's home of trees and Artix and Zuan's castle.
the castle held a item called the orb of balance. The Orb was no ordinary orb. If you touched it you would die. unless you had the power of pure death. which only septular had. however his death came to the power of the 3 Krieger brothers. Bane left for a while to seek out an army to join in a coalition against the Dynasty who a few years back were ready for war. however they needed the orb to do it. The castle was heavily guarded.
however 1 day bioshcok was ridding in the woods when a Grey mist shot through his mouth into his heart. he fell from his mount and started to twitch. as he did so his body contorted and in his hand appeared the Doom Blade. "I'm back.... The Orb will be mine!" as he said this his army's of dead came out of the trees and the ground . he called Fourth his necromancers and they gathered a army to wipe out the castle and get the orb of balance.
around 2 hours later Zuan was notified, Ty2toon Had seen it in his crystal ball. Blood,Bio,Kbolt and zala were marching to wards them. Artix had left to get Warlic and Thergon the rougue.
around an hour later Bioshocks army were below the hill leading to the castle. on the hill the rangers,wizards and paladins were standing. In front were Alex,Zuan,Ty2toon and ty2toon's son Jacobb.
Then they charged both army's, however bishock disappeared and as the armys collided he appeared at the summed of the hill. as he Begin to walk to wards the castle down below. Alex and Zuan had noticed that the enemy commanders had gone. they cut there way throgh to Ty2toon and his son and they fell back to the summit. however on top Bioshock was ripping apart the defense with his other necromancers. he told his Officers to stop here and let him continue alone so the Paladins did not come back.
the 4 men reached Zala,Kbolt and Blood. Then Alex drew his dragon arrow,zuan his spear and Ty2toon his water Spirits. whilst Blood drew his death balde, the necromancers pulled out of the ground 15 skeletons and they Begin to fight. meanwhile below the Resistance was being pushed back by the skeletons.
Was it over for the Champions court? Is Bio doomed to be septular? what about the rest
Coming soon![/glow]
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Post by bloodedge on Jun 19, 2008 13:10:43 GMT -5
Wow, this is really building up. Can't wait untill next chapter...*rubs hands*
It looks better now (spacing). Good to see you take heed.
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Post by zuan on Jun 19, 2008 15:09:52 GMT -5
i love this lol i thoght of it whilst in maths
'Zuan' whats 4 X 8? bioshock VS zuan?
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Post by zuan on Jun 19, 2008 16:58:03 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]Chapter 7-Pt2-Bioshocks Spirit
"dragon Arrow!" "spear of Angels!" "skelton Bane"
the battle continued and the 6 men were battling to the death. then Kbolt fired a blast that renerd aleex unconcious. then Zala fired another blast but Ty2toon fired back. however with the combined power of Kbolt and Zala they pushed him off the hill and down to the floor of the hill.
Zuan was surronded, he drew his fabled spear and fell to his knees. then he spoke in a whisper. "thogh god has left me, i fight ever on, thogh my heart had dived, i will continue, thogh my freinds are gone and evil, i will continue my DREAM!" suddenly a bang and Zuan rose, in his hand was the light orb and in the toher the Champions Orb. he placed them on his spear and shouted the incantation again utnil all the orbs were on his spear. then he blasted it at the 3 men and all the skeltons below. As he did the skeltons disintigrated and the 3 necromancers fell back unconisous.
they got to the castle, it was burning. inside Bioshock was going towards the Orb. zuan chucked his spear and bio was pushed into the wall beside the orb. the 3 loyal men dre there weapons and calledf there chants. they used there attacks to no avail. as Bio dodged them all. then he fired skulls at the 3 men that exploded on impact. however Ty2toon countrd with a sheild. around half an hour later, bio ahd surly won. Zuan was on his knees with his spear throgh his stomach. Aleex with an arrow throgh his arm. Ty2toon incased in ice.
"Bioshock you ahve discraced the order!" "i with my daggers shall slay you!" "corupted Paladin, your destend to die by my axe!"
Artix had shown up with Warlic and Thergon. they charged but when they hit there axe,staff and daggers at bio they became Doom weapons and blasted into the distnace. Bio then stabbed the rougue and cut off his head. then he pointed his sword and Artix. "now Kreiger you die!" "bioshock...it....takes..mor than a spear.....to kill....me." "your still alive. well then die" a lighting shock came from bio's hand and hiot Zuan who was thrwn into the orb.
as artix and warlic were blasted into the walls like zuan Bio reached the orb. he smashed the glass and then. "my anem is Prince Bane of the lands of Fore. i am back here to stop you Spirit. You are niot Bioshock. you are septular." bioshock smiled and lagthed. "well doen Prince Bane, your brothers could nto befeat me so what makes you so special?" "nothing makes me special, and that is what i will use to beat you." "oh year?" then Bio hit a axe into Zuan's path however Bane bloxcked it and it bounced away. however seeing this Bio stuck his doom blade into Bane and pulled it out. He collapsed with a fud and With a cry all hope was lost. the greatest warriros in the land could not beat this new threat. Howver Zuan rose, artix rose and an injured bane rose. Togther they touched the light orb on Zuan's spear. then a bang was heard throghout the land of Lore. A white light had hit and the Balance orb reached out inside Bioshock and pulled the spirit out. Warlic got up. now 1 of you 3 must go into the orb. "i will i belive i cmae back tos ave my brothers... and this is how" then Bane walked towards the orb, touched it and he dispared with a bang of lgith.
afew days later when all fo the men had recoverd and they were around the orb Walric and ty2toon explained what happend. "Basicly the Balance orb has tio eb equal good and evil. otherwise the world will be disbalanced. When Septular/bioshocks spirit enterd the rob a good soul ahd to enter the orb to fill the void. however this will coem at a price. he will die, until the orb is touched by a neutral man. then the orb will relaise a wave of good and evil. Basicly Half of Lore will become good and other evil. all good peopel in the vil half at the time will ebcome zombies,liches or skeltons. all udnead or rougues will become good saint's. basilcy the war would go on for over 15 million years. however also Bioshock will be taken over by the spirit again, however Bane will be re-born. so im afriad the cost of Banes life was tosave Bio. now when the orb is touched the system will be reversed." "yes but we all can not stay alive to protect the orb. so we suggest making us all imortal. this way we will noly die by wound. however Bioshock cannot become imortal incase his spirit is realised." "explain how do we become emortal?" "our dragons unlike toehrs are poewerful in attack and also life. basicly they are imortal. some of there blood will amke us imortal and dragon like. for example super strength, who knows mabye one of us will eb able to fly?"
The End. this is a short story and the next story will countinue on from this. the dynasty will also be involved in the next one burt a bigger part. we placed it in here so you egt to terms with what tjhey did before the current time period and how they will affect future life."
hope youve enjoyed it!
please comment and a realsie date for my new story will coem soon.
as soon as that happens this topic will eb locked!
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Post by saibot on Jun 20, 2008 1:12:29 GMT -5
Extremely Hardcore
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