Neco

[bloodedge]

Okay, so, I've decided to start writing a story.
My first is going to be about a kid called Neco, and DeathKnights.
The prologue is going to be up soon!

P.S. Zuan - sorry I sent you that message, I didn't see this forum at the bottom.

[kbolt56]

cool. what class are you?

[bloodedge]

[glow=red,2,300]Prologue

Neco


"Hey dad! I think I just saw a boar run through here!" cried Neco. He was only about 7 or 8, but was still outcast. This was mostly because of the fact that he was albino, which was in contrast to his black hair which streaked over his forehead and began running over his eyes.

"Sshh!" his dad lashed. "You might scare it away."
He then crept through the undergrowth and unsheathed his axe. "Ugh," muttered to himself, "What's that smell?"
As the man crept forward, the Neco could smell the stink of...something not quite rotten, not quite alive, something more...

"Aaaaarrrgh!" his father cried as his father was knocked to the ground by a black shape.
"Dad!" Neco cried. As he pushed the bracken away, he saw a black blade which split into something like a claw at the tip rip into his father’s stomach.
Shocked, he stood staring at the corpse of his dead, cold father. “Dad!” he muttered, tears rushing to his eyes. “Dad...”

He was then broken out of his trance by a hiss. Neco looked at his father’s murderer. It was a bulky assailant, yet as silent and smooth as a shadow.
Neco couldn’t see it’s face, as the incredible shadows cast across were from it’s gaunt cheeks and deep eye sockets.

A black drop of tar from it’s maw hit the ground, and they both ran.

Luckily, Neco was tall and muscular, so he ran fast. But not as fast as the creature. It slid through with hardly any noise, despite the vast amount of fallen leaves and twigs.

Eventually, Neco came to a clearing in the forest. He sped for the other side, but could feel the monster’s breath on his neck. It made his eyes water.
The shadow reached for him, and was going to grab his neck, but then he tripped and fell into a pit, banging his head on the wall, and breaking several bones. Blood wet the ground.[/glow]

Anyway, that's the prologue. I know, I know, a bit action-packed for a prologue, but it calms down in the next chapter.

[bloodedge]

Jun 9, 2008 15:19:01 GMT -5 @kbolt56 said:

cool. what class are you?

Oh, sorry, I didn't see your post. I'm DoomKnight on here. I'm guessing you're a mage? Nah, you're Necro. Sorry for the mistake

[kbolt56]

cool i would have liked to be leader of the Doomthknights but that job was taken so went for the next best thing. also sweet story

[zuan]

darn i liek action packed books otherwise i don't read em!

[bloodedge]

Lol, thanks you guys.

Anyway, DoomKnights have weakness' that Necromancers don't KBolt!

And Zuan, don't worry. It won't calm down to much. I'll try to keep it Darren Shan! Lol, anyway. I better get on.

[kbolt56]

sweet you guys read books by Darren Shan. i just finished the sixth book in the Demonata series Demon Apocalypse it was awesome.

[bloodedge]

I've read 'em all. Get Death's Shadow. You'll be suprised by who the Demon on the front cover is. Really surprised.

Anyway it's a great book, and

*spoiler ahead*
Juni's back! Celebrate! Lol.

*end spoiler*

[kbolt56]

thats out i thought it wasn't out till october

[bloodedge]

In Britain it is, at least. Where do you live? It comes out first in Britain and Ireland, so sorry if you're not here.

[kbolt56]

i live in the usa we always get the books last

[bloodedge]

Well, it's well worth the wait. It' s the only one I don't have, and the only one i've read in a day, because my mate let me borrow it.

[zuan]

lol u get AE we get darren shan!

[kbolt56]

i just added darren on myspace

[bloodedge]

Jun 9, 2008 15:50:57 GMT -5 @zuan said:

lol u get AE we get darren shan!

Too right! Lol!

Anyway I don't go on MySpace. How'd you get him anyhow?!?! I bet too many people have added him!

[kbolt56]

Jun 9, 2008 15:53:59 GMT -5 @bloodedge said:

Jun 9, 2008 15:50:57 GMT -5 @zuan said:

lol u get AE we get darren shan!

Too right! Lol!

Anyway I don't go on MySpace. How'd you get him anyhow?!?! I bet too many people have added him!

link on his sight for his myspace i might add grubs too are at least the profile that says the name.

[bloodedge]

[glow=red,2,300] Chapter 1 - Staring Death In the Eye

Neco opened his eyes. His left arm was twisted, the bone jutting out of his skin. Also, his mouth was busted and his nose was broken. He pushed himself up.
And a shadow fell upon him. It was pitch-black anyway, so he shouldn’t have been able to notice. But the shadow was darker than night. It was the epiphany of death.

Then Neco remembered the chase. The creature. The death.
Now that it was up close Neco could see the beast’s face proper. He didn’t want to look, but it forced him to stare.

There were two huge cracks for nostrils, running into it’s eyes and mouth, the nose ripped away from it’s black skin.

Then there was the mouth. At first, there was no gap in-between the jaw. But now it saw it’s prey, one thin, jagged line was filled with rows of razor-sharp fangs, filled with poisonous saliva which would make you burn from inside your veins.

It’s eye sockets were oozing with black slime and thick tar, dripping down it’s face. Now that they were draining him, the slime started shining green, and a far away swirling vortex of black built up.

It raised it’s blade. A huge valve of black spirits was in the hilt. Cracks in the midnight edge were filled with the blood of the innocent and the guilty, the poor and the rich, men and women.

The blade fell.[/glow]

[bloodedge]

Sorry, I got to go now. I'll carry on tommorrow!

[kbolt56]

i tip my hat my hat to you good sir.