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Neco
Jun 11, 2008 11:53:53 GMT -5
Post by bloodedge on Jun 11, 2008 11:53:53 GMT -5
Okay, lol. I'll let you have that!
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Neco
Jun 11, 2008 13:17:47 GMT -5
Post by bloodedge on Jun 11, 2008 13:17:47 GMT -5
Chapter 3 - Hunted[/u] Neco sped through the forest, chased by the savage mob behind him. He tried pushing all of the branches out of his way, yet some still whacked him in the face, drawing blood. He then tripped over a huge root in the ground, and landed in a pile of mud. He tried getting up onto his feet, but he just skidded even more. Suddenly someone laughed. Then another. And then another. Then a whole bunch started rolling in. Neco started getting angry. The ring on his finger started getting tighter, channelling his rage. Then someone kicked him, and the mud pool was suddenly aflame, as if it was oil with a match thrown in. Everybody gasped and stepped back, but Neco hadn't calmed down. Tears of fury poured down his face, and when he wiped them away, he saw they were of blood.
He clutched his stomach as he hit the floor, and started spewing. His vomit was crimson like blood, and it sat on top of the mud, unaffected by the flames. Everybody tried to run, and Neco looked up. Vines and branches reached over, intertwining, blocking everybody else in with each other, with Neco, with the ring. With power.
Neco saw now, it was all their fault. They outcast Neco, and because his father wouldn't do the same, they outcast him as well. And that's why they had to go into the forest. That's why his father died.
The blood he had expelled now built up, creating a shape. It was vaguely humanoid, but as it solidified, Neco saw it was different.
The thing was frozen still, allowing for a better view. There was spikes running out of everywhere. The eye sockets were black, bloodied webs strewn across to visor them, and the mouth, and was used as chain mail in other parts. There was huge claws, larger than talons, and they were barbed, and filled with poison.
The main pieces were rough and ragged, all a dark red. And it kept getting darker.
As it reached total darkness, Neco saw it was a suit of armour. For him.
He stepped into it, and it clenched his soul, and didn't let go. It filled his veins and arteries, then burst them. It stretched his body, until he was at least 6 foot high. It then pumped his muscles with deadweight. It burnt his heart, and replaced it with a cage for souls. And then it took his own, and hollowed it out.
After the transformation had finished, Neco stood up straight, and let out a guttural growl. And then he slaughtered those he were to slaughter him.[/color]
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Neco
Jun 11, 2008 14:53:35 GMT -5
Post by Jester (Bio.) on Jun 11, 2008 14:53:35 GMT -5
I keep thinking of devil may cry while I read this... Really cool
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Neco
Jun 11, 2008 15:15:49 GMT -5
Post by kbolt56 on Jun 11, 2008 15:15:49 GMT -5
...EPIC
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Neco
Jun 11, 2008 15:38:20 GMT -5
Post by bloodedge on Jun 11, 2008 15:38:20 GMT -5
Lol, thanks you two. Devil May Cry 4 is awesome, I haven't been on any of the other games yet.
BTW - the next chapter will be a few years and tears on, and Neco has a friend! Or at least, a teacher...
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Neco
Jun 20, 2008 1:46:07 GMT -5
Post by saibot on Jun 20, 2008 1:46:07 GMT -5
This story is hardcore man
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Neco
Jun 20, 2008 14:36:51 GMT -5
Post by bloodedge on Jun 20, 2008 14:36:51 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 4: Working Six Feet Under[/u] Neco walked through the cold cemetery. He'd grown used to the smell of rotting flesh and the feel of the moist ground. He'd done more than just grown accustomed to it over the past seven years though. He had learnt to love it. It was a freezing night tonight. The wind tore mercilessly through the tombstones, cracking monuments. "Mistress Moon is full this forbidden midnight," commented Neco. As he came to the crypt, the wind and Neco stopped as one. There was a worn plaque on the front that had once been gold, but was now a rusty steel. Neco made out "Voto Penates" on it. "Heh," Neco laughed, "Forbidden Home. How unfortunate for me." He'd learnt a lot since the night his father died. Bolt had helped a lot. Bolt was a Necromancer. He re-animated the dead, and implanted impurities in the living. He once made a beautiful red rose turn to a poisonous green rose, then back to red, then to blood. It scared Neco at first. Hell, it still scared him even now! But he'd managed to cope. Somehow. Neco heaved the crypt doors open. He had unnatural strength. This is partially due to his suit, which was now a part of him. As it opened, a huge gust of wind blew against him. With it came the howls of trapped souls. "Meh," was all that came from Neco. He then stepped through into the dark. It was dark and damp in the crypt. Neco waved his hand, and dark flames ignited down the corridor. He strolled down until he found a door. Well, it was more like a wall with a button in the middle. Ancient runes were carved into it, some jagged and brutish, others elegant, with a finesse. "The spirits of the ancestors guard this room. Beware, if you enter it shall lead to your doom, and you shall be trapped forever inside this room, trapped inside this tomb," Neco read. "Nice poem. Too bad it's not true. Bit more action if it was." And at that he pressed the button. The door slid open, and dust hit Neco in the face. He coughed, and then stepped through. [/glow]
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Neco
Jun 20, 2008 14:44:55 GMT -5
Post by zuan on Jun 20, 2008 14:44:55 GMT -5
this is good! also Kbolt got a menchion i mean i think eh is in nearly all the story's?
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Neco
Jun 20, 2008 14:47:16 GMT -5
Post by saibot on Jun 20, 2008 14:47:16 GMT -5
Hardcore again
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Neco
Jun 20, 2008 14:47:19 GMT -5
Post by bloodedge on Jun 20, 2008 14:47:19 GMT -5
Lol, yeah. I said on the last page to tell me if anybody wanted to be in the story. I'm introducing them bit-by-bit. You two can still be in it. Just tell me if you want to be Necos ally or enemy.
Thanks you two!
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Neco
Jun 20, 2008 19:44:29 GMT -5
Post by Jester (Bio.) on Jun 20, 2008 19:44:29 GMT -5
Very nice, can't wait for some more action in it next time though I wonder how I'll be introduced...
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Neco
Jun 20, 2008 20:48:13 GMT -5
Post by saibot on Jun 20, 2008 20:48:13 GMT -5
Yeah I wanna be in the next one.
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Neco
Jun 21, 2008 3:39:26 GMT -5
Post by bloodedge on Jun 21, 2008 3:39:26 GMT -5
Okay, I'll try to introduce you Saibot.
And Hollow-this chapter was just an introduction to a few chapters where Neco is trapped with, well...some big dark things that aren't very nice.
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Neco
Jun 21, 2008 10:55:46 GMT -5
Post by Jester (Bio.) on Jun 21, 2008 10:55:46 GMT -5
Oooo.oooo okay lol can't wait
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Neco
Jun 27, 2008 9:11:57 GMT -5
Post by kbolt56 on Jun 27, 2008 9:11:57 GMT -5
i wonder what the big dark thing is and who sent
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